So are you some kind of clown or something?
I like the material, agreed that the one liner thing is hard to pull off because you need a lot of material, but you seem good at it.
My personal take? Lose the ukelele during the monologue. I know it's like a security blanket but you'll be better off in the long run.
You need any one liners you come to me. $5 bucks a joke.
This one is free - my sex life is like Abraham Lincoln.........my last four scores were seven years ago.
"I came here to kick ass and chew bubble gum... and I'm all out of bubble gum."
- - Rowdy Roddy Piper
"It takes a big man to admit when he is wrong. I am not a big man"
- - Fletch
That is a good one.
Thanks for the advice. In my defense the vast majority of the gig was sans instruments.
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Amputees are just like everybody else:
They put their pants on one leg...
...and then they're done.
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Nice work man. Keep it up and keep us posted.
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Quick update of this whole comedy thing. I'm still doing semi regular gigs here in Columbus but have yet to get out of town. I started hosting events too. I just hosted a joke telling competition at the gateway film center and will be emceeing a Woodstock esque festival at the end if April to benefit tree planting efforts in our city's parks. I'm not a millionaire yet, but at least I can say I'm a professional.
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Congratulations. I don't know if I could do it. People say I'm funny, but I'm usually just reacting to the situation. So I think I'd be better at improv. I don't think I'm good at setting up my own jokes. Plus I don't enjoy hecklers.
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Bud Selig: "I'm the worst commissioner ever"
Rob Manfred: "Hold my beer"
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If anyone's in the Columbus area tomorrow (Wednesday the 16th) I'm doing a show at Shane's on Livingston ave at 8:30 with national act Dan Swartwout and Darrell Dawson among others.
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