You all have been kind enough to provide me with feedback on my sports-related songs (good or bad - :-)) so I decided to put one of my non-sports-related songs together and see what you thought of it. It is about the homeless and it's called Dirty Paul...let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Ryan
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLYh7AfTRQI
That was very moving Ryan, thanks for sharing.
My dad got to enjoy 3 Reds World Championships by the time he was my age. So far, I've only gotten to enjoy one. Step it up Redlegs!
I have a question that isn't really about the song as much as the direction. What are you going for? Are you using this as a tribute to the homeless folks or are you using it to make a name for yourself or maybe even a record deal? Neither are bad things, but I was just wondering. It kind of influences my opinion.
"My mission is to be the ray of hope, the guy who stands out there on that beautiful field and owns up to his mistakes and lets people know it's never completely hopeless, no matter how bad it seems at the time. I have a platform and a message, and now I go to bed at night, sober and happy, praying I can be a good messenger." -Josh Hamilton
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