I'm a long time reader but never posted much, but I need some advice...

I'm in a 12 team points league, with the following point values:

Batting - 1 point each for Total Bases, RBI's, Walks, and Stolen Bases,
Half a point (.5) for Runs Scored, minus 1 point each for Strikeouts and Caught Stealing

Pitching - Win - 10 points, Loss – minus 5 points
Save – 5 points, Blown Save – minus 2 points
Quality Start (starter pitches at least 6 innings and gives
up 3 or fewer earned runs) – 2 points
Shutout – 10 points
Earned Run allowed - minus 1 point each
Innings Pitched – half a point (.5) for each inning pitched
Strikeouts - 1 point for each

My team looks like this:
C - Paul Lo Duca
1B - Dan Johnson
2B - Josh Barfield
3B - Miguel Cabrera
SS - Carlos Guillen
OF - Adam Dunn
OF - Lance Berkman
OF - Nick Swisher
DH - Kelly Johnson
SP - Jake Peavy
SP - John Lackey
SP - AJ Burnett
SP - Bronson Arroyo
RP - Bobby Jenks
RP - Dan Wheeler
Bench
C - Mike Piazza
OF - Delmon Young
OF - Josh Hamilton
SS - Stephen Drew
SP - Daniel Cabrera
SP - Tim Wakefield
SP - Phil Hughes
RP - Jason Isringhausen

The trade that I'm proposing to the other guy is:

Berkman, Dunn, Jenks, Lackey
for
Carlos Beltran, Cole Hamels, and Joe Nathan

He's not biting yet...any suggestions to improve it or that might be more palatable???