Where are you at? I tried the search function, but didn't find anything... although I can remember the thread in the past.

I'm looking for a promotion in my line of work and have been putting out resumes. A military outreach program contacted me and didn't really like my resume.

I've changed it around, but I need some opinions. Anyone consider themselves an expert at writing resumes or deal with hiring people? Reply or shoot me a PM if you are willing to help me out, I'd appreciate it.