Quote Originally Posted by Matt700wlw View Post
This is only the second article I've ever written, but I thought I'd share


This is my first one...


Constructive criticism is welcomed! Please be nice, I'm not getting paid for this
Loved it! Just bookmarked the blog. Great lede (anything about the Reds that starts with "97 wins" wins my approval), nice flow, concisely summed up the entire team.

I'm a writer by trade too. Since you said you're looking for constructive criticism, the only thing I can think to offer for now is don't feel the need to use a lot of commas. Sentences will read a little easier if you're not setting off a bunch of items. I like Purdue's online writing lab a lot--here's what they have to say about it: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/

Can't wait to read more from you!